Under the same sky, so far apart.
on the front steps of my darkened house,
A flash of lightning across the sky
Catches my eye.
I look up to see clouds curtaining the moon.
You’re standing under the same sky
Somewhere only the moon can see you.
A rain drop falls on my cheek.
I close my eyes and you’re there
The raindrop tracing your soft contours.
The wind is picking up.
Raging storm is silence to my ears.
In that silence I hear your name
Echoing in the empty chambers inside me
Tell me the wind whispers in your ear
Of sweet melodies, long forgotten.
Lost in my reverie.
Time melts into oblivion.
In stolen moments
With a hush inside and outside.
I open my eyes, the night has cleared
Transported back to the front step of my darkened house.
Till the next storm comes we will be
So far apart,
under the same sky.
Love,
Manal
Nice: I like it. Snowing here … no rain … April showers are sow showers!
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My Hometown is almost a desert. Really hot! anytime rain is a blessing.
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I could send you some snow … wrapped up in an e-mail. We had rain after the snow … and then it snowed again. It’s stopped now. Strange weather.
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Wow that does sound strange. Haha your wrapped snow email will melt here as well! But still it’s a very sweet offer. Thank you 😊
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Where do you live
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In multan.
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Sohan Halwa pher tau dabaa kay milsaktaa hay.
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Hahaha the popular demand. G zaroor
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The popular and always requested demand. Like we have over here zamzam demand you will have this
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Zamzam khajoors. There this is sweet patisa type hoti ha. Yumm
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Not very found of patisa, wife is, she is quite found of these thing. I am not that much desi, so avoid all the alum gallam stuff
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Never forget the cultural tastes.
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I never enjoy it as well since childhood for some odd reason. Not found of methai except of Multani Habsi Halwa.
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Oh alright.
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Wow
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Such a beautiful poem. I love the way you write.
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Thank you so much Brenda 😊
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My pleasure.💜
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Wow this was a great work if we talk about symbolism. Cause how you compared a persons thought chain with a Strom was really artistic. Perfectly executed.
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You know your poetry man! Thanks Ashutosh I really wanted to make it work with the symbolism. I’m glad someone caught that!
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So that is true love . Now I Can’t wait to fall in it 😁😂 Lovely lines , the scenario is truly breathtaking .
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Thankyou Karan. Yup that’s a love that never leaves your side. It’s up to you how you want to look at it. I think it’s beautiful.
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Phenomenal piece.
“Time melts into oblivion.” It is my favorite line.
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Thank you so much 😊
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My pleasure
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Reblogged this on Brainy Versatility and commented:
Thoughtful Poem by Manal
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Thats really sweet. Thanks 😊
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😀
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the sky is blue
too you
then clouds
gather
short
forays
add up
two days
to make
hay
under
sodden skies
of you and i
so far away
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Poetry inspires poetry! 👍🏼
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hopefully
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This is so Amazing and powerful.
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Aww thanks I’m so relived! This came from the heart.
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Hugs 🙂
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😊😊👊🏼fist pump kinda girl 😁
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hi5 to that u go Girl 👊
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👊🏼haha yup!
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There are many stories here, many ways of thinking about who is where and what may or may not have happened. Lovely poem.
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Thankyou so much. 😊
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Absolutely loved this read!
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Aw thanks a lot. May I know your name?
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No one’s every asked me that on here before. It’s Jacob. Pleasure to meet you.
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Hey Jacob nice to meet you too. I like knowing my fellow bloggers.
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Well, I do have an email for my blog if you’d like to correspond there.
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All my emails go to the same account. Mess in there. This is better, can talk about the works as well.
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Lovely !
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Thankyou. 😘
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Great write i enioyed it
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Thank you
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Enchanting piece of literature… 👌👌👌👍👍
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Thank you so much Ankan
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My pleasure
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😊
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Love the symbolism here. Very well executed.
This is great
This is reality
I believe it’s fate
That made me say hi
To another awesome personality
Under the same sky.
My skills are a bit rusty. 😉
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Haha no this is great! Hello to you too😊
And thank you btw
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Ur too kind 🙂
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😊😊 thank you. Takes a bow*
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Trips her as she does** 😀
What a prank!
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Hahaha falls gracefully and takes you down with her*
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Burst out laughing**
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Haha 😂😂
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😂😂😂😂😂😂
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You write poems too…that’s awesome…your writing style is just fab. Btw do read my latest post
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I’m actually a better poet than a writer.
I sure will visit your blog.
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That’s very kind of you..and feel free to give suggestions if you find anything wrong✌ I’m just a newbie
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Loved this💛
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Thank you 😊😊
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amazing
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Thankyou
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Reblogged this on D.B. Mauldin and commented:
Poetry
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Thank you for reblogging
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Woow❤I like your stuff girl👏👍😇
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Aww thank you 😊😊😊
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😁Welcome❤
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♥️♥️
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Beautiful poem straight from your heart.
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Hey, thank you.
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Gave me goosebumps. So grey yet so beautiful. Much love.
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Aw thank you so much for your lovely comment.
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I read it 2 times, very beautiful and touching. Takes me to another world.
It a poem you want to read if you are on vacation.
MashaAllah superbly written.
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Oh I’m flattered! Thank you so much. Secretly following aunties just got a scoop!
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Aunty will get a call soon from one of these Aunties. Larki haath say nikal rahe hay 😀 Haw Haeee
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Romantic dramay Dekh Dekh Kay Dimagh kharab hogya hai.
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lol, mayra tau Treasury key transactions dekh dekh kay meter short haugaya hay.
About drama, “Kiya aap bhe….” 😄😄😄
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You’re in KSA right? What do you think Is the ideal country to work in for an accountant?
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Right I am in Jeddah. Difficult question to answer now, almost every country is protective now in hiring from outside, unless you want to move to Canada or Scandinavian country like Sweden / Denmark. But don’t know the job market.
It depends also on qualification, or he is totally fresh?
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Yes just cleared. But he works for Kpmg that should count for something.
I thought you had to clear another test for Canada or Europe.
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O it’s great, well overhere the market is closed, the Govt has made worst kind of restriction. People are selling their shoes, and leaving the KSA.
The sponsors, don’t give the money to them properly in most of the cases. People live overhere for 15 to 30 years. And now the sponsor say, due to lack of business, they can’t pay anything. Making them illegal by not renewing the iqama / residence permit.
People are in really bad shape. So wouldn’t advice overhere.
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Oh that’s really bad. I heard the economy crash. So you’re leaving KSA?
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Don’t have any idea about my future, we don’t come under Saudi Law, I am working for a multilateral bank.
But our management has decided to do reorganisation and decentralisation as well. So all staff is blank, as to what will happened. We are in dark.
Who will be leaving and staying, so we are in mumbo jumbo!
About the economy, don’t ask how bad, it’s worst. The whole Small and Medium Enterprises business is gone, which is the backbone of any economy. Its just depressing and stressful of time.
If it’s not happening to you, than someone close to you is going through worst of time overhere.
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Well good luck with that. I hope things work out.
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Things look worst rather than going good.
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Why don’t you come back to Pakistan?
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Good question, who will take me. Once you are out of industry, difficult to get back in.
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It’s worth a try.
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SR say RS pay aana itna aasan nahe
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True true.
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With font size 72
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On a serious note, it’s very beautiful, we don’t celebrate Valentine, But would love to dedicate it to my wife. ❤
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Aw really? That’s very sweet. I hope she likes it!
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Yes, I am pretty sure, afterwards she will say. Kahan say copy kiyaa hay, I will tell from yours.
So you will definitely have one Aunty to scan everything about you. Intelligence waloon kau lagwaa daygi jabh taqh clearance nahe haugi.
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Loved this one!!!😍
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Thank you so much.
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Luvd this one!!!!
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Lovely poem, full of longing. 🙂
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Ah yes. Thank you 😊
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I feel free like I want to dance in the rain after reading this!
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Rain and romance right?
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The best combination!!! And maybe a warm drink. 😊
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Maybe ice cream if you’re a daredevil 😁
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Even better!!!
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😁😊
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Very powerful
Strong voice
Simply beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful…
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Beautiful … And I mean the poem and the weather! 🙂
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Thankyou 😊
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Your poem brings tears of joy down my eyes, a different kind of rain, but a blessing none the less.
Thank you so much for the follow and I noticed you liked a few of my stories. I’d really like your feedback on a few of them. If you comment and let me know what you think, than I will surely promote your blog and send my followers your way
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Thank you so much for the kind words. Yeah I will sure do that sometime.
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can i say its wowwwwwwwwwwww
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Haha yes you can it’s much appreciated. 😊
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So beautiful. It drew me in and I felt as if I were living it.
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Thank you 😊
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This is lovely!
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Thank you 😊
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you’re welcome.
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This is beautiful! ❤️
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Thanks Becky! ♥️
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Loved it!! And i really liked this line: Raging storm is silence to my ears. ❤
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Thank you 😊
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I am not fond of Facebbook. I hope Twitter is ok
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lovely poem..thanks fr stopping by
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I love Under the Same Sky. Very interesting perspective.
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Hi
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Aww thank you so much!
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Loved you work with symbolism its very meaningful
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Thank you so much. 😊
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It was a nice artistic stroke
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This reminds me of certain time in my life. ❤️
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All good things I hope! The heart gives away the answer though. I glad my poem reminded you of something good 😊
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